Mojomatic's 100 Most Recent Comments

Looking Into Fire (UF) by becwil 4 months ago
Yet another marvelous addition to this intriguing cycle that cries out to be put on a CD. The intensity of this piece is profound indeed.
Broken Chains by becwil 4 months ago
Epic beauty. The original composition already had a majesty and grace and now Bec's additions take the drama and passion and kick them up a notch. Yet more proof that she is THE Go-To-Gal when it comes to collabs.
Searching For Youkali (demo) by becwil 11 months ago
What I like about the music here is how it is a continuation of the music in the Overture. For me, some of the sound effects remind me of sonar blips, like being on a submarine, evoking a sensation of being under water. Which works for me since water is an important image in the poem.

I just wanted to thank all of you for your generous comments and also for your constructive criticisms, especially of the technical kind. I believe they will give Rebecca and I food for thought and help us figure out what we need to do to take these demos to the next level.
Overture (Youkali demo) by becwil 11 months ago
Whether the poems come across to the listener as scenes form a 1960s European sex film will be another matter altogether smiley

But there is supposed to be a narrative through-line that runs thru the poems. I will leave it up to all of you to judge whether the story is there or not.

But for now thank you all for your very encouraging comments and for technical advice too. As Rebecca said, we are looking for criticism as well.

I am not going to post any of the poems, so I am hoping to get feedback on my vocal performances, whether the poems can be heard, if words and music are working together, etc.
Protocol by becwil 1 year ago
I only wish this could have gone on longer. Bec, you are Queen of the Collabs.
Spicy Acidic Limbo by becwil 1 year ago
As usual one listen is never enough. Meditative and evocative of things that can't be easily put into words. My fave part was the dripping water at the end. Immediately brought to mind an image of spelunking through some ancient subterranean cavern. Lovely collab. Well done, both of you.
The Keening Spell (UF) by becwil 1 year ago
I just listened to this 3 times straight through. It is a very evocative meditation. The first half seems to be a sombre ritual, while the second half almost sounds celebratory. Funeral rituals are for the benefit of the living, a way to get us through our grief. What interests me is how those bells near the end seem to be asking a question. Not just about the dearly departed, but about ourselves too. It is at times like these that we all must face our own mortality and ask what is the purpose of life if we are only to end up as dust? I'mlooking forward to the next installments of Ultimately Fossil. But more so, I am interested in hearing them all together when you are done. Perhaps you should present them in a podcast with an on line discussion after.
Nostalgia by Ziur 1 year ago
Z, you are one rockin' loopmeister! This is a pop masterpiece. Love the vocal and the lyrics.
Baby Mine (new and improved) by Geechi3 1 year ago
What a sweet version of a great song. I keep seeing the momma elephant's trunk reaching thru the cage's bars to rock her baby to sleep. A tear? no... um... er... I just got sumpthin in my eye. And you put it there, Linda.
Let Us Improvise Motifs by becwil 1 year ago
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Bec, it was a treat to work with you. We overcame mic obstacles and pitched ideas and suggestions back and forth. Felt like the journey was the destination. And this final product is definitely the icing on the cake. Hope we get 2 do more 2gether. I have actually stopped leaving stars, but I will make an exception in this case. That's because you are a star.
Sweet Marie by ansteller 1 year ago
Rock on, Herbert!! I can hear Chuck Berry and Keith Richards turning this into an all-nite jam session. Crank it up to 11!

And yes, I am feeling better. Thanks for asking.
15 minutes by ansteller 1 year ago
Well done, Herbert. The guitars sound great! Glad that I could be of some assistance.
Shine Jesus Shine (movie) by ddball 1 year ago
Wow! This is definitely one of your best. Certainly one of the best singing jobs you've done yet. But also the rhythm of the images seemed to be plugged right into your performance. Bravo, dd!
Night Chicago Died Paperlace Homage by ddball 1 year ago
I remember when that song was a hit. Terrific version, dd. You almost turned it into a kind of anthemic dirge. Great images as usual. For some reason now I'm thinking Paperlace was an Aussie band. Yes? But i have to admit, I always thought it was a poorman's version of The Battle of Epping Forest by Genesis.
Reality TV by sonicdeviant 1 year ago
Well done. This actually reminds me of Zappa. Possibly what he might be doing if he were still around. Thanks for this.
Do they really by fotakis_m 1 year ago
I just came back from listening to the original version and listened to this one again.You really did improve it. Congratulations.
Do They Really... by AnangaRanga 1 year ago
Very interesting to listen to this. I came here via a link from fotakis-m's revised version of this song. I think he made some good improvements, but I think there are some good beginnings here. My one criticism is that sometimes the loops seem to be fighting with each other. The guitar loop that I thought worked best is the hard strumming one. But the saving grace of both versions is Nina's vocal. Her voice is like some beautiful undiscovered gem. And, as in her heartbreaking rendition of Don't Dream It's Over, her natural innocence gives poignancy to the lyric here. Congratulations to all.
Do they really by fotakis_m 1 year ago
Very interesting song. I thought the loops were well-constructed. Really liked the heavy fuzz on the guitar solo. But mostly I loved the vocal. She has a distinctive voice. I remember her from AnangaRanga1's cover of the Crowded House song Don't Dream It's Over. He put some kind of synth treatment on her voice, but she sounds better au natural. Now I'm off to listen to the original versionof this, the link for which you so generously provided. Thanks.
The Trial Of Stevil Darkman (old) by StevilDarkman 1 year ago
Looks like my electric bill is going up this month because I'm definitely sleeping with the lights on

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Like someofthe previous callers, I also enjoyed the narrative thrust of this piece, even without a text. Hmm, imagine if there were a text. Hmmm...
Swamp Rock Blues (old) by StevilDarkman 1 year ago
Love this! Reminds me of "Weasels Ripped My Flesh" era Zappa. And the frog chorus is classic, as in Aristophanes ("Brekekekex, ko-ax, ko-ax" smiley
Walkin' Home (old) by StevilDarkman 1 year ago
Infectous groove, dude. As a great fan of walking home late at night I'm adopting this as my anthem.

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Taxi, a tribute to Harry Chapin by ddball 1 year ago
Okay, something glitched. What I wrote was:

Sweet and poignant, dd. First time I heard Chapin he was singing this on the radio and later in a televised conert, from which I think you took some of your images. The song is basically a short story set to music, a great influence on me as a lyricist and fiction writer. BTW: I consider the black screen near the end one of those beautiful accidents of creativity.Not only does it fit the lyric, but it's also a tribute to Chapin himself, who left us way too early.
Taxi, a tribute to Harry Chapin by ddball 1 year ago
Sweet
Timothy by timtation 1 year ago
Sorry, I should have mentioned before that I quite like this. Well done.
Timothy by timtation 1 year ago
Manages to sound both innocent and sinister at the same time. I thought the high-pitched vocals near the end were quite funny. All the same, I don't think I'm going tobe able to sleep tonight. If the singers aren't saying "Timothy" what are they saying?
My Bonnie Flushed With Excess by ddball 1 year ago
A particularly heartfelt rendition, dd. But tell me, when all and sundry were flushed down the pan did they go closck-wise, it being Australia? Because here in Canada they would be moving counter-clockwise. That puts a whole different spin on things.
Poetry of Wisdom by ddball 1 year ago
I could never understand why it was called homework, since we always did it on the bus on the way to school or in the cafeteria before homeroom. It should have been called "bus work" or "caf work". My theory is that it is the cause of low attention spans, not TV. In fact TV improved our memories, hence the reason why many of us are good at Trivial Pursuit and Jeopardy. Oops, I think Jeopardy is on now...
Cameleon Funk by kpenson 1 year ago
You really are making my day! Better believe I'm downloading this too. And the best part? All this ass-shaking I'm doing really wards off the morning chill. Have a funky day, my friend.

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You Got the Soul by kpenson 1 year ago
Totally awesome! This kind of mellow funky groove is the perfect way to start the day. You totally took me back to my mispent youth. And you know what? I'm totally prepared to misspend it all over again after hearing this fabulous tune. Thanks, man!

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NO NAME(listen and tell me what it should be called?) by mcfly2611 1 year ago
I think I'd call this "Gie Us Anoor Bevy, Hen" smiley :- smiley

But seriously, Martin, I'm going to download this because I'd like to take a shot at it. I think I have some lyrics I can match up with it. Send me a wee message to say you're cool with that. BTW: How did you like the stories?
ALZHEIMER'S LOVE SONG by mediadad 1 year ago
Both jaunty and moving. Interesting how you achieved that. When we find the courage to tackle difficult and frightening subject matter it can be such a blessing to discover it opens something positive within us. I suppose that is the power ofthe creative spirit. Thank you for this most inspiring song.
Little Red Rooster (vocals) (Willie Dixon cover) by Barretok 1 year ago
You must be the seventh son of a seventh son because this is the baaaaaddest version of this song I ever heard. For sure Willie is looking down and smiling. I'd be proud and happy as a pig in s--t to collab with you sometime.
OXJAM - Past Present Future by joolsoakland 1 year ago
Intriguing song. Really moves along nicely with some fine playing, singing and interesting lyrics. Wish you had posted the lyrics. I'd love to be able to read along.
Empty Road by David Ross 1 year ago
kick-*** tune, man! Intriguing lyrics too. I must concur with the previous caller - would like the vocals to be a bit more upfront, whether you think you sing well or not. Although I also have to admit that as they are thereis a nice ghostly quality that fits the song. Good one!
Rise and Shine by SteveLong63 1 year ago
Sorry, no tech notes, only my admiration. Thanks for sharing this heartfelt gem. Also like the sweet portrait of dad and daughter.
St James Infirmary Blues (OXJAM) by Bass2x 1 year ago
Sweet-*** collab! Fine performances from all, especially GB. (Gary Busey? On Drums? COOL!!) Hope y'all had a big pot of gumbo after this.
Dr.Cream by woofer3 1 year ago
I suppose because of the subject matter there's a bit of a dramatic quality to this. Have you thought that this could be the start of a theatrical project?
Mama cut the line by woofer3 1 year ago
Great song! Kept me boppin' all the way through. By the way, only amateurs borrow. I think this song proves you're the real deal (and that rhymes with "steal" smiley smiley
black and white world by woofer3 1 year ago
Very enjoyable. I also really like the lo-fi ambience. It definitely feels black
Thumbnail Moon by Mojomatic 1 year ago
Thanks, Woofer. I buried the vocals in the mix only because the flaws were more obvious upfront.

Bec, you can take the gurl outta them thar hills, but... oh, you know.

Cheers, Bass. Next time the boys want $2 and ice for the Dr.Pepper

Ans, maybe we should collaborate as vocalists.

Glad all of you liked it!!
Crybaby (old) by StevilDarkman 1 year ago
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Very trippy! This is the s--t!
Marching to a Different Drummer by DJ_Shadowkat 1 year ago
5

Rockin' little number. Very cool way to honor your friend.
7+40 by Barretok 1 year ago
5

Cool loop work! All the influences really meshing together.
Collab Wanted!!! by ansteller 1 year ago
5

This is a nice upbeat number. Let me see what I can do.
Highway Chaos by mikecreamer 1 year ago
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Good one, Mike. I like the subject matter. I think it's healthy to give vent to the chaos within us in this manner. Certainly better than actually taking out your car into traffic whenin a bad mood. Thispiece reminds meof the film "Crash" by David Cronenberg, about people whoget sexual satisfaction from car crashes. I also like the film of the same name by Paul Haggis. I think your piece is also an interesting commentary on the highway community where many spend a good deal of their lives. (Not me,though, I don't drive)
Life is Beautiful, My Child by ddball 1 year ago
5

Beautiful collab. dd, you always manage tofind just the right images. Like the perfect marriage of lyric and music, you marry image and song insuch a way that one can't imagine them separately. Yet another triumph!
Stupid Boy by pragawalker 1 year ago
5

A nice slice of pop perfection. smiley
Bye Crazy Diamond by pragawalker 1 year ago
5

All loops?!? I am green with envy. A lovely tribute to Syd. smiley
Jimmy's Shooting Blanks by Mojomatic 1 year ago
Thanks, dd. Merci, Jerome. Cheers, Bec. You all rock!

Hamdog, I'm glad you like this. Maybe some time I'll have another listen to your other no name tune, see if I can't come up with something. I wouldn't mind hearing some of your other tunes too. Get in touch with me.

I'm Dying Like the Flowers in My Room by bencharity 1 year ago
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First of all, let me offer sincere condolences on the passing of your aunt. I was initially drawn to this piece by the intriguing title. I think i would have been fascinated by this piece as it is. But knowing the back story allows me to connect in a very human way. The sounds now reflect, not just different emotions, but the conflicting emotions - sadness, anger, fear, impotence, relief(?) - that one might feel during the passing of a loved one. I think it took some courage to express all that, whether you did it consciously or not. Thank you for sharing this.
no name (collabs wanted) by hamdog 1 year ago
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Very tight and a great sound. My first feeling (and this goes for "no name 2" also) is that the instrumentation is so dense there is no room for vocals. But I like a challenge, so I'm going to download this and if I come upwith something I'll let you know.
Oppenheimer, Bhagavad Gita, Trinity by ddball 1 year ago
5

Fascinating stuff, dd. Always a pleasure to listen to your narration.
Paris Tour Eiffel [Lounge-Ambient] by archie7777 1 year ago
5

Tres contagieux! My hips are on automatic pilot. If my French were better I'd take a shot at writing some lyrics.
One Of Us Cannot Be Wrong by Mojomatic 1 year ago
Thank you both.

Bec, I don't know what to say about panning to the left. I assumed the default would take care of it. Thanx for the mini-tutorial. I'll try to be a bit more aware of these things.
Hallelujah Romantic Version by ddball 1 year ago
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dd, I've seen your flag on the marble arch and love may not be a victory march but your version of one of my favorite L. Cohen songs is truly a courageous and moving Hallelujah. Inspirational indeed, my friend. More like this (and maybe a movie to go with it?)
Izmir by Ziur 1 year ago
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When I heard the water and the birds at first I thought I was in for a quiet musical interlude. But this was very wild and enjoyable. I was trying todifferentiate the loops from the real instruments, but it was difficult. Impressive integration. I'd like to visit Izmir some day.
Running Up That Hill (w/vocal) by Mojomatic 1 year ago
Merci, Bruno. I am happy you stopped by.
Spinning Wheel Movie by ddball 1 year ago
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Entertaining and moving as well. I loved watching the body language of the arguing couple, especially juxtaposed against the song. Engaging vocal performance too. Nice one, dd.
Pachyderm Sunset by becwil 1 year ago
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An intense collab. Evoked - much like your story, bec - the simutaneous separation and connection between everything. I'm waiting for the hairs on the back of my neck to go down.
Divergence (UF) by becwil 1 year ago
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Wow! That surely was a treat forthe ears and the intellect. What a great concept! I agree with one of the previous callers that this shouldbe an opera. The interesting thing for me is that the music already conjures such strong images in the mind. Could any stage or film images match what is already there in our heads?
The Whole Story by Mojomatic 1 year ago
And thanx for your comment, dd. I had a feeling both of you might appreciate this.
The Whole Story by Mojomatic 1 year ago
Thanks for your comments, bec
Freedom Blues by Splifford 1 year ago
5

This was a good collab. The guitar was stinging. I liked the vocal but I kept wanting to hear it "testify", if you know what I mean, get more intense. I felt this about the song in total. Also, there was the mention of adding an organ. Another possibility would be a harmonica, playing wavering chords on a chromatic - like Little Walter - interspersed with some single-note stabs. But as it is - well done!
Running up that hill by Ziur 1 year ago
5

Only loops!? Wow! Before I saw that I was going to commend you on how expertly you twanged that Jew's harp ("jaw harp" for all you PC addicts). This is terrific. Would have loved to hear a J. L. H. vocal. Would love to lay one down for you some time, if you are so inclined. Thanks for this.
Falling by johanevander 1 year ago
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Let me echo rinca's sentiments: wonderful voice (good lyrics too). And, yes, this feels like it wants to take off and soar into the rock stratosphere! But as it is now this is a terrific piece with great promise.
The Great Decider by TheMarsupial 1 year ago
5

Really enjoyed this, thanx!
That's all I'm giving you by pete 1 year ago
5

I just took a really nice moment to close my eyes, lean back and listen to this. The bongos remind me of tablas. Always a treat to hear Linda and enjoyed sethjaquay as well. In fact I think I'll go check out his page. Thanks, Pete.
Just Can't Explain by Dylan 1 year ago
5

Nice collab. Vocal and music work well together.
Spies by ciheins 1 year ago
5

Pretty impressive for only loops. Near the end there was some kind of phase-shifting sound that I thought might be a voice thru a vocoder. But i guess not. I think Spies is as good a title as any. The piece does have a kind of cinematic or dramatic quality.
Variations by Feline 1 year ago
5

Yes it is simple and I like it too. Right now it is an interesting exercise in textures. But what I'm also hearing is that it wants to build into something more substantial. I believe what you have here is only a beginning... and an end. I think there is a dynamic middle waiting to be brought to life. I look forward to hearing what comes next.
flash your prada by andehlu 1 year ago
5

This is great. I'd love to hear some kind of Iggy vocals on it. Something flash and trashy...
Talking Terror Yodel by Dylan 1 year ago
5

Succinct, as all good messages should be. Although a few more bars of yodelling wouldn't have gone amiss smiley
Världen Snurrar by brnPetra 1 year ago
5

Such a gentle intensity. It doesn't matter that I don't understand Swedish, the song speaks to me and I understand it. I like the arrangement as it is, but if you still want to work on it further please remember that simplicity is your song's greatest strength.
Sweet Tooth Blues by Macmike 1 year ago
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Bravo, Mike! Considering what little you had toworkwith I thinkyou rose to the challenge. My guess is that this not the last collab we will do together. The ball is in your court, mon chum. Vive les lo-fi blues poets!!
Who Would Imagine by SlimGirlFat 2 years ago
5

Very interesting song. You remind me of one of my all-time fave singers: the late great Kirstie McColl.
So Many Roads ( Cover version ) by Guitardaddy 2 years ago
5

Love this song! Some very soulful string bending. Totally got me hooked. I like the vocal too.
Slunk Surfin by waltwilcutts 2 years ago
5

Really intriguing! I went on a massive air guitar frenzy there. The styles of your contributions are so eclectic and yet the playing is always of the highest quality. I'd call you a very well-rounded musician. I hope one day I can entice you to lay some tracks on one of my pieces.
Computer´s World by RiGee 2 years ago
5

Sounds like it could be part of some kind of techno-opera. Even though I don't sprechen zie Deutsch I got the sense of a narrative. I dig that kind of bleak romanticism. It makes me want to dig out my old Kraftwerk and Tangerine Dream records.
My Song by Zombre 2 years ago
5

What a freakin' amazing sound! Like a souped-up theremin. Rock on!
BOWLING ALLEY by wal4u 2 years ago
5

Great blend of loop and live. Loved the lyrics and the vocal. I'd love to sit in with ya sometime at Rodney's Rock 'N' Bowl. By the by, whose round is it? I take mine straight, no chaser...
Smooth (for gsharp) by waltwilcutts 2 years ago
5

Totally impressed. You are the ****, Walt.
Cryin by waltwilcutts 2 years ago
5

Outstanding! You are one talented player. Would love to collaborate some time.
To the Sea by Mystified 2 years ago
5

Haunting.I thought of a siren singing out to passing ships, luring them to their doom. But what a way to go.
Show Me How You Feel by BrunoGatinet 2 years ago
5

Well done, Bruno. Cool lyrics with energetic music.
False Religion by RichardRinger 2 years ago
5

This feels more accessible than most experimental pieces. I was oddly soothed by it. The title suggests that religion (or just Christianity?) is the opiate of the masses and listening to this has a similar lulling effect. Is faith merely a comforting illusion? Are we alljust sleepwalking to our doom?
Don't Dream It's Over/Cover by AnangaRanga 2 years ago
5

Interesting. The more I listened to this the more I was engaged by the underlying tension. The sterile (synthesized) innocence of the vocal adds a certain poignancy - even despair - to the lyric's message of encouragement and hope. The image in my mind was of a child of winter encased in ice telling me to carry on. Tender and heartbreaking. I thnk you have made some subtle, yet brave choices here, although I don't know if any of this was your intention. I guess that's what happens when we put something out there. We risk losing a bit of ownership when others embrace our work.
Thou Shalt Fly Now by spootane 2 years ago
5

I wonder what Bill Conti would think of this? I love hearing the inspirational "Rocky" lift given such an elegant treatment.

By the way, I wanted to leave a message on your page for "Rock You More Sad Dwarves" (great title) but I could only load half the song. Anyway, what I heard I really liked, especially the medieval twin-guitar attack. For some reason a Shakespearen lyric from Twelfth Night popped into my head.

"It was a lover and his lass, with a hey and a ho and hey nonny no and a hey nonny nonny no, that over the green cornfields did pass in springtime, in springtime, the only pretty ringtime when birds do sing, hey ringa-dinga-ding hey ringa-dinga-ding, sweet lovers love the spring."

I'd love to hear you turn that into a Metalhead's Madrigal.
Qbec Tribute by zefif 2 years ago
5

Tres cool, fif! My heart rate is pumping like a locomotive. I was born and raised in Montreal so I have a soft spot for this piece. In fact (because I live away from there now) it makes me a little homesick. Un hommage parfait! If you would ever be interested in remixing any ofmy stuff, let me know.
The Last Flower by Geechi3 2 years ago
5

Awesome collab! Speaking strictly as a lo-fi poet, I don't think I'm qualified to critique the production, except to say I really like it. I love that kind of stuttering, interrupted hook. If you ever felt inspired enough to remix any of my stuff, I'd say go for it.

Beautiful voice, Linda. I wish you would have printed the lyrics, not that your singing isn't clear, I just like to read lyrics. "Don't push me down" already sounds like a refrain, so maybe there's more structure than you think.

I would love to collab someday with my spoken word playing off your singing.
Lorna Doone (KDMan cover) by Dylan 2 years ago
5

Great vocals and guitar. Lyrics too. Definitely a fave.
Rumi, a Reminder by ddball 2 years ago
5

I enjoyed watching this very much. I also love the poem and your narration of it does it justice. My favorite line is "a little wind cleans the eyes".

Maybe your screen name should be "little wind".
movie of 9/11 24/7 by ddball 2 years ago
5

D, your doc is amazing. This is my first collaboration on icomp and I can't tell you how incredible it feels. Really humbled that my work inspired this and really proud to be sharing the credit with you. You call yourself a conservative. I have to say I lean more to the left. But when I watched this I was reminded that those labels don't mean a thing anymore. We're all outraged, not only by the events of 9/11, but all the political, social and personal fallout that came after and which is still upon us. We still have no idea how things are ccontinuing to change after 9/11. But I consider our collaboration a sign of hope. Thanx so much.
Gliding through time by mcfly2611 2 years ago
5

I like the drama of this. I'm always up for writing lyrics. If I come with anything I'll get in touch
lost in space by rmalavazi 2 years ago
5

Quite a dreamy groove. The kind that gets under your skin and follows you around all day.
Pink Walt by waltwilcutts 2 years ago
5

I guess we've answered the age old question - "Which one's Pink?" Must be you. Great playing and Iwas totally digging every note, had no idea one was missing. This song reminded me specifically of Shine On You Crazy Diamond,which is my all time favorite Floyd song. Definitely going intomy favorites.
Feel the Rage by EvilFactman 2 years ago
5

I only hope to God that I'm never the one to get you pissed. Scary fun.
REBIRTH by BrunoGatinet 2 years ago
5

Les mysteres de la vie - indeed! What a collaboration! My French isn't so good, so I had to listen a few times. Your piece improves with each listening. My French, unfortunately, does not.

Bruno, I hope you will check out a couple of my spoken-word pieces - My First Cigarette or 9/11-24/7. I still have to work on my production values if I want to match what you and ZeFif have accomplished. But I think the spirit of my work is similar to yours.

Merci, merci, merci.
Rebirth by zefif 2 years ago
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Bravo! I think it was my ears being reborn. I closed my eyes and saw myself on the dark rain-slicked streets of Marseille. Rue de L'intrigue. You are my new inspiration to improve my production quality. Now I'm going to check out Rebirth Reloaded. Merci.
Electric Kool-Aid Acid Reel by Mojomatic 2 years ago
Thanx for the input, zefif. What I really need to do is take a Garageband tutorial. I just downloaded a whole bunch of percussion loops. Hopefully there's a bothran somewhere among them. Cheers!
Cold (3 of 5, Adverse Elements) by becwil 2 years ago
5

A very evocative soundscape. Or can I go so far as to say tone poem? I could feel my fingernails fringing with frost (say that fast 5 times).
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