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| Book's Flight no vocals by carolineguenther | 2 years ago |
 Love the piano. Super, and very emotive too. |
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| Nuttin But Hope by PerpetualDawnz | 2 years ago |
Thank you for your comment  Shall give that a twirl |
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| Chill by RevelStep | 2 years ago |
| Liking the rhodes intro The double bass, and little riff are nice Break also good. Perhaps add a touch more percussion in there and some brass? Well done |
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| Triple C, P n A by Verbalist | 2 years ago |
| Sounds good. The vocals are good. Sounds are crisp. Maybe phatten the drums up a touch Enjoyed it |
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| Sex Appeal by Naaji | 2 years ago |
| All your tunes are great. You must have a deal by now surely? |
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| Mediots by ItLivesBeneathTheBay | 2 years ago |
| Great Intro. Love that vocal. Strings are good, and the break too. Vocals sweet too |
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| madness by Lapskin | 2 years ago |
| I like the bass at the end The intro was a touch too harsh for my ears... But its good on the whole. Would definately add some extra sounds riffs in there |
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| Flight of the Raven (A dedication) by Filmscorz | 2 years ago |
| This is great. The Piano is good, but the sax makes it! Superb! | |
| You Don't Even Want to Talk to Me!!!!!! by Naaji | 2 years ago |
| Loving it as always Great Vox. The break is original. Liked it |
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| Make It Bounce A Little More by jamesjrn | 2 years ago |
| Enjoyed this Original well done. Would say that some of the levels are a touch too loud in places. But its a great song |
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| aint no sunshine when she is gone by irok | 3 years ago |
| Nice little peice you have here. Well done |
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| blues.. by paulbmusic | 3 years ago |
Liked it from the start. Great piano, very mellow whilst uplifting at the same time Super. |
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| Lucid Dream by OffspringOfMars | 3 years ago |
Great Intro. The strings are really nice as is the piano. It fuses together well. I enjoyed it |
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| Cold Zone by Rau | 3 years ago |
Good Intro Vocal. The production is sounding crisp. Levels are good and it is easy to differeniate each sound. Enjoyed it |
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| P Machinery remix by LFT | 3 years ago |
| This is very interesting. I enjoyed it |
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| I want to live on by annamaria | 3 years ago |
| Great production hear. Bass and drums sounds crisp. Maybe bring the hats up a touch. Synth is good, and excellent vocals ^^ |
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| In the hood by DuWop25 | 3 years ago |
| Good beat. Stringsa sound crisp. Synth is good too. Wicked G. |
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| The Difference of Opinions by Naaji | 3 years ago |
| Great Tune. Loving those chords. Break sounds good and vocals are excellent! | |
| march of spring by Narananda | 3 years ago |
| Super. Great Vibe, as usual. Interesting composition and structure |
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| My Virtual Mute Trumpet by telo12 | 3 years ago |
| Like the pinao sequence. And The the trumpet sounds good. It woudl be good to add some percussion and perhaps a drum beat later on if you had time Well done |
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| I Should have Known by josephfears | 3 years ago |
| Like the song. Im not too sure but it seems the backing chords are out of sync a touch. That vocal is great ^^ And I like what your trying to do Good Effort Well Done |
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| white man play with gun african play with drum remix by rogerboreham | 3 years ago |
| Interesting song. Enjoyed it. | |
| THC by morfadrena | 3 years ago |
| Like the percussion and guitar riff. Good effort. | |
| THROUGH THE WINDOW by RichardHJones | 3 years ago |
| Good tune, Nice hats, and guitar riffs. Strings are good too. | |
| Pop it by 40oz_ofSmoKe | 3 years ago |
| Quirky but I enjoyed it. | |
| Warmer days to come. by keedragoon | 3 years ago |
| This is great. Can imagine flowers growing to this. Beautiful |
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| odd bits and bops by Lapskin | 3 years ago |
| You have some good elements in this. Sound levels are a bit off in some parts. But I enjoyed the creativity of this. | |
| Silver Lake by Joshua_Irwin | 3 years ago |
| Liking the overall feel of this song. The Guitar is good, perhaps lower the main one down a notch, as that backing one is superb. The ending is superb. I think with a few more ambient fx or vocals this could be even better |
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| not so fluffy pink clouds by Lapskin | 3 years ago |
| Very much my style. It flows, but at the same time it has some abstract segmenting. Well in my opinion. Naughty little bass there too. I would personally add some ambient vocal of some time in parts, and maybe some bongos/congas. Enjoyed it |
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| In Kerosene Light by Xolv | 3 years ago |
| Firstly thanks for your comments ^^ Appreciate it. Liking the guitar, and the shakers. The bass comes in a fraction too loud on my set up, so could be me.... The melody is nice.... any ideas for adding some female vocals. Im no expert on latin but it seems the song could do with one? Overall great ^^ |
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| Hot In Here by Naaji | 3 years ago |
| I love your vocals. I dont suppose you might be interested in singing on some of my peices? ^_____^. | |
| brains blow by gideon | 3 years ago |
| Like the break and beat. Good vocals. Some parts sound a touch loud on my system. But I like it |
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| Musicbox v5 by randolf | 3 years ago |
| Great tune. Vocals are good, sounds fairly crisp. Perhaps lower the bass a touch or up the drum levels. But liking it. Very good |
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| UpTempo_thu15jan2009 by garymusic | 3 years ago |
| Good sound. The synth and bass sound nice. Not too sure about the shaker. But the arabic feel thing is great |
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| Final Frontier by rwade | 3 years ago |
| This has got some great sections in it. As a whole not sure if the structure is spot on. I mean perhaps some bits should have been in earlier etc. However this is not meant as a criticism I like it. Just trying to help you improve it Perhaps some abstract vocals in there too might help |
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| You Want Me to Be by Naaji | 3 years ago |
| I like this song. As it progresses the beat sounds nice. The vocals are great, perhaps add some reverb and delay on those ^^. Good sounding peice. |
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| Beneath the Shadow of His Wings by skanger | 3 years ago |
| Like the intro!This is a great tune. The one thing I would say is that perhaps the beat doesnt do this track justice. Maybe try to see how it might sound with another one? Good track though, and my comment on the beat is just trying to be helpful so please dont take it the wrong way ^_______^. |
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| YOU AND I [Club Lounge] by archie7777 | 3 years ago |
Great intro. Beat is a touch too loud I think. Hats fit well. Great extra percussion and bass. The 2nd hats I think are a touch too loud. But sound good. Great vocal. The female vocal perhaps add some revereb and a touch of delay. Maybe some trumpets or sax. This is great! Not criticising just saying how I can hear the song in my head. Excellent again ^^ |
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| The Closer I Get |
3 years ago |
| Good tune. Good you put that reason guitar loop to good use! I think the break is a touch too loud. But other than that I liked it! | |
| Communication by ipodgrrl | 3 years ago |
| Good tune. I would lower the drums a toucfh as they seem a touch too loud. Maybe add siome ambient vocal fx? Not a ctiticism at all just trying to hekp you make your work better ^^ | |
| wakemeup by adamcote | 3 years ago |
 I like this tune. It has good ambience, is the hiss meant to be in the background? Sounds good either way! Needs a beat or delayed percussion maybe? ^^ |
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| Come (on) and Ride With Me (with Andrewcane & Undahill) by DeadGiveaway | 3 years ago |
| Great tune. Reminds me of kinda the streetz/warren g. This tune DEFINATELY needs needs a women as a hook or backing! 100%... Then you got yourself a sure winner! | |
| Island Encounter by udbsynth | 3 years ago |
Like this tune. Good little bass line. Original. But definately needa vocal on it ^^ Liked it ^^ |
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| Feelings (always) - electro beat version by udbsynth | 3 years ago |
| I didnt like the beat to start with. But when the bass and synth came in it sounded good. Human League vocals sounding cool too They vocals seem a touch out towards the end of the tune? A good effort I enjoyed it ^^ |
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| Sunflower (Little) Rev 3 by NCSalmon | 3 years ago |
| Sounding a lot better now sir. As Eidolonia says the vocals sit a lot better ^^. Distortion sounding good too ^^ | |
| New York State of Mind by ClayPotts | 3 years ago |
| Like the keyz. Superb sax, and great vocals. Like the strings too. Great. | |
| Delusional (upon request) by hiphopmoses | 3 years ago |
| Love it as always. Like the licks. Vocals sound good too. Perhaps add an old bluesly vocals sample in there? Excellent ^^ | |
| What your used 2 by hiphopmoses | 3 years ago |
| I really love your stuff. Im glad you contacted me regarding your work. Sounds great. Lyrics are flowing, and tune rollin. Great breakdowns, and loving that sax (or trumpet)! | |
| A Letter 2 HipHop by hiphopmoses | 3 years ago |
| Love it. Great sound, bass and beatz sound phat. Love the key lick, and the hook. Surely this has been released? ^______^ | |
| Up the Down Escalator by DjDetski | 3 years ago |
Liking the riff. Sounds heavy. Vocals are pretty cool too. I think the tune could do with some breakdowns and a few extra twisted effects. But this is very good indeed. |
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| BIRD by rf061992 | 3 years ago |
Like the song. Phat production. I think the vocal could be cut out at times. And it definately needs some scratches in there ^_____^ in my opinion. |
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| Happier Times by MMI | 3 years ago |
I apologise. I was listening to your and accidently put the comment onto someone elses work  Yoru production is great. Loved the glitch. Nice chords at the end. Well done! |
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| Never Go Away by lupiroz | 3 years ago |
| Like it. Good vocals but perhaps a touch too loud. Production good overall. ^^ | |
| Studio Video Music #2 by SaveNibelheim | 3 years ago |
Love the intro. Liking the use of the Reason 'Phone Blip', have used that at times too ^^ Super intro. Liking your use of samples that I have used in some of my songs. and you put them to better use! Cool tune ^^ |
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| Glen Bridge by DeadGiveaway | 3 years ago |
Great stuff. As NC says needs some Vocals. perhaps obscure ones? Any way cant criticise. Super! |
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| Sunflower (Little) by NCSalmon | 3 years ago |
| Guitar sounded good. Vocal sounded good, perhaps a touch too loud? I dont listen to metal at all but I found it Interesting. Perhaps some distortion on the vocal at times? Slow it down at times? Good effort ^^ |
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| Dreaming A Dream [Club] by archie7777 | 3 years ago |
Like the tune. Good vibes. Think that the beat needs to be compressed or phattened a touch. Perhaps filter the vocals down a touch too. But lovely none the less. ^^ Really enjoyed it. |
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| untitled 2 by jamesxsrecords | 3 years ago |
| Like the song. But on my system many parts distort heavily. So perhaps lower some of the levels a touch. Good feel though ^^ | |
| Pillow by Lapse | 3 years ago |
Good style. Like the glitch ^^ Goes into good mellow points, and dirty rolls. Perhaps the drums are touch too loud but that would be my only crticism ^^ |
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| you by rogerboreham | 3 years ago |
| Positive yes ^^ Perhaps add a few more instruments, flute maybe? Enjoyed it though ^^ | |
| Black Coffee in Bed by ClayPotts | 3 years ago |
| Not my style at all.... However I liked it. Original and sounded phat. Well done! | |
| Th' Duch by RockDHouse | 3 years ago |
| I like the song as a whole, however in my opinion (and probably not worth too much) I feel that the minor chords dont sound right. The synth is good as too is the break. | |
| Voglio Te (J Remix) by zeven1 | 3 years ago |
Nice song, somehow it reminds me of a song I heard in Thailand? Good structure, however the EQ is a touch off I feel. Well done. |
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| covlution by Lapskin | 3 years ago |
If I drank a cup of tea and made this I would be chuffed. Original, intriguing. If you added some bass sounds, a low kick better(in my opinion). However, Its absoluetly superb, and could easily be in a movie scene ^^ |
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| Moth Tears by paulflute | 3 years ago |
Like the style. Takes you a nice journey. Some levels I think are a touch load on some instruments. Perhaps add some reverbed percussion every now and again? |
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| Tabernacle by puppy7 | 3 years ago |
Hi there, thanks for your post on my song. My critique of AlexSoulScience was actually meant to be positive thats all. As to my vocal yes it is repeated all through the song, however this is for a club, so in my opinion it was ok. Though I did have another vocal that I used initially and swapped between the two so maybe I should do that! Anyways, I love the intro to your song very good. The vocal stabby chord is nice. And when it breaks down its nice. That melody, I love, I have heard it somewhere and its hard to remember where! I think that some kind of spoken dialogue, perhaps an extract from some religious peice at the beginning would help? Just to give it a touch more ambience? Good Work. Enjoyed it. |
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| Steps to Freedom by AlexSoulScience | 3 years ago |
| I just want to apologise for my comments on your song. It seems tat I have annoyed some people by how I criticised your song. Please dont take it personally and the criticisam was actually meant to be positive and help thats all. |
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| 909 by PerpetualDawnz | 3 years ago |
| Indeedy the vocal is a sample ^______^. Thanks for your feedback |
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| Steps to Freedom by AlexSoulScience | 3 years ago |
Sounds excellent when it kicks in. Not to sure about the Analog FX being repeated so much. I think nearer the end of the song is better, so perhaps shorten the intro a touch. I know when your in the flow it can be hard to make criticisms and make judgements. I like the overall idea, some sax, and some vocals would make it better maybe. Dont take it the wrong way I like it. If it has more variation it will be great. If you want to listen to mine, and make some criticims too great. Production is good by the way. ^_______^ |
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| Jungle Juice by pharmakeus | 3 years ago |
| Liked the song. Good that its off key. Some parts seem a bit too loud, but could just be my setup. Love the Guitar Riff. And the breakdown is excellent. Only criticism as I say is some levels seem a touch up and down. But if you listen to mine you will see mine is the same ^_______^. Easy | |
| I Can Feel It [ Club] by archie7777 | 3 years ago |
Like the intro. Sounds pretty phat. However the vocal sounds like its underwater at times? Cant really describe that, just maybe tweak the EQ a bit. Like the idea of the song, drums are ok but need phattening a bit. Good effort though ^_____^ |
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| smack the queen in the face by tototoo | 3 years ago |
| LOL. Innovative. Sounds ridiculous, but you never know good be a hit due to its ridiculousness. ^^ | |
| Wine, Dinner, Music by DJGM | 3 years ago |
Like the vibes here. Great progression. I think a vocal is needed here for sure. A womens of course! perhaps some sax into. Great little riffs to keep up interest. May I be so bold as to ask where you get your loops? I use reason and have never heard any of these before ^^ Well done! |
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| Lost Tales from Camp Blood (End Credits) by anitric2000 | 3 years ago |
Never heard of camp blood but I liked your peice. Innovative, and good sound levels and production I thin. If I knew what the show etc was you were talking about perhaps I could have commented more |
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| Hard Times by quviq | 3 years ago |
Like the song. Would be good to add a beat to this. However original and a good vibe im getting! |
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| East Side Love by Naaji | 3 years ago |
Love it! Would like some samples of your voice for some of my work. Good breaks, love the congos too. Kinda reminds me of everything but the girl and massive attack combined, but in a jazzy softer style! |
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| Finding the time by Joshua_Irwin | 3 years ago |
Suberb intro. Perhaps add some delayed and reverbed percussion at the beggining? The overall structure is good. Perhaps you could lower the levels of the Loud distorted guitar sections too. But I like this song alot. Great break too! |
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| 1994 by sixstringtree | 3 years ago |
Like the bass, guitar, Love the vocal! Your right needs an eq but its a great song! |
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| when city goes to bed by rustyred | 3 years ago |
Like in this style. Where did you get that vocal? thats great! Cant complain about this one! |
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| Skety by Lapskin | 3 years ago |
Very Original. Great Intro. For some reason I feel some kind of asian/indian vocal wouldnt be a miss here. Perhaps some kind of chanting? Great breaks too. The strange 'caaaa' type sound is a bit loud and that part goes on a touch to long in my opinion. But I like it! |
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| vital signs by telecaster29 | 3 years ago |
Enjoyed it. I would say the toms (low drums) sound a bit off. But the overall concept and feel i enjoyed. Refreshing. ^____^ |
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| A Last Message From Dad by darkseid | 3 years ago |
Sorry for your loss. I liked the peice. One thing I would say is that perhaps it needs some kind of beat. But then regarding the reason the song is written perhaps that is a touch insensitive of me. Liked it. |
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| ties me over by Lapskin | 3 years ago |
 I think this tune has potential. The Riff is good, maybe you could add some more distortion to make it darker ^_______^. I like the beat but how about some more snares in there. My only crticism is the beatbox type bit, although the breakdown itself is good ^^ I like it overall. Good job! |
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| Spiral in My Hand [Feat. Naaji] - Badstone by Badstone_Music | 3 years ago |
This is good. I can hear a reason loop in there which is good thart it has been put to use. Like the vocals and the pad ^^ Could make the drums a touch louder I think. But I liked it. |
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| Have You Heard the Voice of God? by lummie | 3 years ago |
Interesting. For some reason it reminds me of some strange german band. I think the vocal could be cut out a little more at times. but apart from that i enjoyed it. |
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| Basking Glow by Joshua_Irwin | 3 years ago |
Love the guitar. Good breaks too ^^ Nice work |
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| Razor by sixstringtree | 3 years ago |
Love the guitar. Reminds me of some of the songs on the babel soundtrack ^^ Peace |
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| Missed Call by archie7777 | 3 years ago |
That vocal and intro is great. I would perhaps add some reverb to some of the sounds. But its very creative ^^ I would love that sample in one of my songs ^^ |
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| Flute and Cello by telo12 | 3 years ago |
Enjoyed listening to this. Would be good to add some ambient fx etc in my humble opinion ^^ but it was a pleasant change to listen to it ^^ |
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| Infection Turns by Joshua_Irwin | 3 years ago |
This is the exact kind of sound I am looking for some of my work. If you would be interested in me using some of your samples etc or working with me that would be good. Specifically im interested in the guitar! Superb ^^ |
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