daibhre's 100 Most Recent Comments

We Better Have It Now by UncletupeloFan 2 years ago
4

This is fabulous - superb poetry.
Just Like Us by jbulford 5 years ago
5

Fabulous. I'm jealous - and an instant fan!
I'm Holding Your Picture by TheTiler 6 years ago
5

Excellent! Esp. the guitar work - nice and clean. I would have backed the vocal off just a bit and done more reverb - maybe some oohs and ahhs behind the chorus. (Timing on the staccatto strings is tricky, ain't it?)
Side of the Road by dmcnelis 6 years ago
4

I'm thinkin' you need a bridge in there to break it up - could be strictly instrumental. Much as I like the progression, the melody variation is just not enough to do it for me. A little open reverb on the vocal would soften it and meld it together with the accompaniment, too.
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