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| You'll be next by cloak | 6 years ago |
 YO YO YO - great songwriting! I love your chords, and you have a good voice as well. OOOh - you know how you have like four measures of just guitar playing (like after "show you what I mean"  ? You should introduce some instrument just for those interludes. Also, the melody is really good, but in a few spots it doesn't seem to flow quite with the verse. Overall things are really good though - headed in a great direction! I'm hearing mucho talent. Rock on, rock over, rock out! |
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| azure by elder | 6 years ago |
 Yah - what douglas said - and I really like the sweeping hihat groove you drop around 1:20. NOICE. Some nice lyrics, definitely, sung weird, would top 'er off. Cheers! |
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| Gangsta Gangsta by soccerrich12 | 6 years ago |
 OH YEAH!!! This is some powerful music. I could definitely flow over this. And if not me, then countless others, fo sho. Let me just say: what I think would really set it up would be a touch of swing in the beat - so the off beats are just a TAD later than they are. GANGSTA GANGSTA!!! Noice music. I wanna party!! |
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| Bravo Two Nine by Gammellsan | 6 years ago |
| WOW - you play all that stuff? Pimps in Space sounds like an album that should be famous. Nice chords and arranging. I have to say, Perhaps a good baritone section with a percussive part would ease the void created by the smooth horns vs. looped percussion. Nice concept, though! Continue rocking us with your chords! | |
| The Strange Case by Reinholt56 | 6 years ago |
WOW - sounds like a lot of time went into this baby! Holy aboundance of loops! I like a lot of the parts. I hadn't considered the possibility of delivering a song with constantly changing structure before. Maybe the key is going out and thencoming back to something over and over again - you do it alot, I mean giving one of the chordal loops or synth arpegios in the foreground, then messing around for a bit, and coming home again. So maybe it would be more powerful to give more accent to those 'home' loops - have only 2 or so, and focus in on them when you come home. Anyway, just a thought - I could be way off as far as what you're trying to do. At any rate, well done, and keep up the JAMZ! |
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| PLEURIS by SK | 6 years ago |
WOW! What a jam! You definitely know how to put the notes and beats in their right spots. GOODNESS! |
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| Empire01 by SK | 6 years ago |
YO YO YO SK I gotta say - very tasteful arranging. I could definitely flow over this. |
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