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Released: Mar 21, 2004 | 10:14 PM
Category: Rock
Application: GarageBand
Loop Use: Some loops

File Type: .mp3
File Size: 2.91 MB

Plays: 9886
Downloads: 21
Weekly Plays: 0
Weekly Downloads: 0
Statistic reset day: Sunday

License: Commercial derivatives allowed; contact artist for permission
only loops are percussion... can't play drums in my apartment. mic is my built-in eMac mic. Heavy flange and reverb because after ten years and much smoking.... my voice is crap.

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Blacklilyorchard Artist

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Figure... what the hell. I'll enter the contest. Just don't put me on american idol-atry.
please rate me
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13 years ago
gnome Lead Developer

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Impressive!
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13 years ago
Blacklilyorchard Artist

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gnome...coming from you... nice compliment. thankyou
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13 years ago
deputydoofy Artist

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Excellent tune. On top of that, anyone with your talent who rates any of my stuff above a 1, 2, or 3 has to be extremely nice as well. smiley
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13 years ago
MarkusHelm Artist
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Very very nice!

Excellent tune.
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13 years ago
giovanni Artist

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I like this tune! I do wish you would let us hear a bit more of the vocal though... Good hook... excellent!
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13 years ago
Blacklilyorchard Artist

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Special thanks to geeksRus for posting a link to this song on his website www.geeksrus.com. He also told me that he was streaming this song in CompUSA somewhere in the States. Not sure how that made me feel but i think thats where the extra traffic is coming from.
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13 years ago
sriggins Listener
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Totally dig it smiley
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jl Administrator

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something about the eyes
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13 years ago
Cockeyed Artist
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I like the intro...Vocals are too far back in the mix IMO...The guitar works well in this song, but personally I would like more variation in the bridge, and it gets a little repetitive by the end of the song..I would also like to hear more variation in the drum loops...I'm hearing a high pitched noise at parts of the song...Don't know if its from the compression or perhaps some of the levels are just too high...Might wanna try bringing all the levels down to see if that fixes it...For the ending I would suggest doing something similar to the sparse intro...Sort of winding the song down but thats more of a personal preference thing...Anyway, nice work over all...I had no trouble listening to the song several times while reviewing...Keep up the good work!
Rating: 3&1/2 stars (I rounded down because it won't affect your rating anyway)
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13 years ago
vaporman Moderator

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Get the right producer and this song could easily be a hit. The overall song has a great feel. The flange on the guitar is a little overpowering. Maybe the guitar is just to high overall. I think that is one of the reasons people are saying the vocal track is too low. The similar frequencies of voice and guitar compete too much for the same bandwidth. Maybe you could try finding the strongest frequency in the vocal and EQ a notch out of the guitar so it comes out a little cleaner. Very catchy song though. I may download this to listen more on the iPod!
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13 years ago
Blacklilyorchard Artist

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where am I getting all this traffic from?
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13 years ago
giovanni Artist

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BlackLily - Just a little more traffic and you'll get on the "Most Popular" list... hmmm... I'll help... I'll hit reload a couple times! smiley
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13 years ago
vaporman Moderator

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Congrats! You are on the most popular list now!
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13 years ago
Blacklilyorchard Artist

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one month to get on most popular... wow
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13 years ago
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Great song. The bass just gets me all wrong at certain parts. Otherwise it would have been a 5 star. It could use a little more diversity. Switch up the groove for a few measures maybe.
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13 years ago
Blacklilyorchard Artist

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Hey if anyone wants to actually send me a guitar and a bass so I can play this song properly... I have to give this guitar back and the bass line was done on the guitar. ( I refuse to use a KB for this kind of song) The next song is on hold until I get something I like....
and there will be more 'diversity' in the next one but I liked the steady groove for this song. It would have sounded way better with an actual bass. I intended for this song to be unpolished and raw. If Neil or Howe gets to hear this, have one of them write me... I could use a guitar and an old mesaB (the chrome one you bought in edmonton).
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13 years ago
Blacklilyorchard Artist

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neat that this will be on the disk. Is it going to iTMS? if it does really well do we get a chunk for the songs? Maybe Steve Jobs will send each of the people on the cd a dual G5?
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13 years ago
goofy Listener
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very nice. I like the vocals and the guitar.
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13 years ago
Garni Listener

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I liked it guitars could have less flange tho.
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13 years ago
Dadai Artist

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I like your song. The sound is infectious (a bit reminiscent of the Cranberries). I know what you mean about reverb and voice!
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13 years ago
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I really liked this song! I liked the chunkyness of the guitar. Good Luck with this song, I think you have a winner!
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13 years ago
Blacklilyorchard Artist

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i like Barbie's Letter better. The rock stuff is always more satisfying. The next song is going to be huge on energy and about 150 bpm. I will probably stick with a steady groove based rhythm.
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13 years ago
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Good effort very much your own sound.Bring the vox up in the mix.Rock On
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13 years ago
myopic Artist
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Man, really cool stuff. I know you reviewed a couple of my songs, and it took me a while to get to your stuff. Sorry. It reminds me, somewhat, of a lost track from the Lost in Translation soundtrack. Really rough and deramy.
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13 years ago
bj Artist
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I know I shouldn't say - but: "keep smooking". If that is what gives you this expresive voice.
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really good, I hear Stone Roses(ish) and that sorta ilk in there and that can only be a good thing.
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13 years ago
Blacklilyorchard Artist

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stone roses... haven't heard that one in a while. I loved them. All that cheezy brit underpop. Produced or engineered by john leckie (he would be someone I would LOVE to work with.. is he still permastoned?) I think. A true genius behind the console. "... I wanna be adooooooorrred.."

thank you very much
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13 years ago
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This is terrific. You've got a great voice, and I love the chord voicings you use. Wanna teach me some of those chords?
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13 years ago
Blacklilyorchard Artist

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where did I get a hundred hits in a day from?
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13 years ago
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amazing.. I love all your songs..you have the style and sound I love...fresh and real...thank you

are you Kim Deal?..
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13 years ago
JamieSPC Artist
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I don't think your voice is "crap" at all... nothing wrong with "weathered" vocals (whiskey and cigarettes worked for Stevie Nicks!)...

Great job.
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13 years ago
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Terrific song! You're really good.
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12 years ago
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Love this...it reminds me of Siouxie...the flanger makes me feel like I'm falling...BJ
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12 years ago
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The heavy flange and reverb can't hide your good voice. You don't need to hind behind filters! I want BlackLily unplugged!

Scratchy voices have more character anyway. smiley

Excellent mix!
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12 years ago
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I like this kind of music - is it called riot girl? - and I think you have here a worthy contribution to the genre. Actually, in my opinion, the flange on the guitar is fun, and pretty subtle, I reckon (but maybe less - or even no - reverb on the big gruungy guitar? those overdriven guitar sounds are usually more grunty dry, and if it was dry, then it could probably come down a tad? I'd keep the reverb if there is some unpleasant timbre on the guitar that the reverb is covering up, tho), the vocals are loud enough - and really good, in tune and expressive, and the song is good too. The bass "guitar" is just mixed up to loud - that's why the vocals sound too soft, I reckon. That's just my opinion. I also think the arrangement is just fine. Maybe some lead guitar, on outro, nothing busy, just the sort of stuff you have on the - what do you call it? - bridge?
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12 years ago
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nice feel. great guitar. i wish that i could play as well. i like the voice alot. hurry and buy a nice mic so that everyone can hear your voice better, because it's worthy of being heard. very unique and good to the ear. keep it up!

cydniko
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12 years ago
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Dear BlackLily
Can't think of what this tune needs. I Loved it. I too, only use GB drum loops. Darn near every thing else is me. (You see people tend to laugh when I play drums). Anywho, back to you. You can hours just tweaking the mix but without doing so the song is still a genuine winner. It's fresh, on the edge and yet palatable. Good Luck, Moptzar.
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12 years ago
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wow people are still listenning to this song? It's like a year old.
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12 years ago
sciencehunter Artist cool smiley
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crowded coffeehouse small-stage, smoke, converstaion, clanging, local's stage vibe
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Reminds me of "Her Majesty the Baby". Very nice.
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12 years ago
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What can I say ! hehe ...love it
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11 years ago
StevilDarkman Artist

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Saw your name in chat and came to check your stuff out(I'm nosey like that) and am I ever glad I did. I like it....it's a little unpolished but I like that, especially for the style. I prefer a more real edgier sound myself. Welcome back and thanks for sharing.
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i like you. and i like your stuff
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10 years ago
Mikee Artist very cool tune, when i hear this i think of the shins' "caring is creepy", one of my favorites by them. i love what you did to the vocals on this track! (even if what just to cover up your voice smiley) it adds another dimension to the song....
Last edited by Mikee, 10 years ago.
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10 years ago
surfnut Artist

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Great stuff!
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You rate. lots of lo fi goodness! smiley
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Really good song! I love your vocals! Did you win? smiley
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Very very cool groove. Love the vocals too!
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