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Released: Mar 17, 2012 | 4:47 AM
Category: Folk
Application: ProTools
Loop Use: No loops

File Type: .mp3
File Size: 5.29 MB

Plays: 805
Downloads: 0
Weekly Plays: 2
Weekly Downloads: 0
Statistic reset day: Saturday

License: No derivative works allowed
A song I just wrote tonight about Fractured Love...If youre going to Listen Please read the Lyrics..And listen through phones if Possible for the full experience of this ..

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livelargemusic Artist

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My Apologies for the abrupt Description...I wanted to say more but was having trouble uploading and had to go through the process 3 times..This song I just started writing around Midnight my time..Came kinda out of nowhere..The Concept is based on drawing a comparison between Addiction and the Broken Relationship. We feel in both situations that we are in bad place and feel trapped..Whether because of Family, Or Finances or Fear..We stay in Situations that are harmful to ourselves..All The Best to Everyone on this St.Paddy's Day. Enjoy the Listen..And Please do read along with the poetry..
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Mike_Lynn Artist

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Very nice song Scott. Like the vocals & the plot too.
An enjoyable listen. Wuld love to see the strumming part becoming more acoustic.

Cheers / Mike
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You seem to be shaking one good song after the other out of your sleeve of your night shirt.



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5 years ago
videoscore Artist

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Wow. VERY impressive! Yes, the lyrics are clever and powerful and the melody is catchy and well-played. Vocals are spot-on. Love the rough guitar and simplicity of the construction - powerful indeed!
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sammydix Artist

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like the lyrics, like the melody, like the chords, but no so sure about the guitar effect. but i guess you'd call that artistic freedom.
comes together well when all summed up, tho. solid songwriting.
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5 years ago
livelargemusic Artist

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I did a remix and backed off the drive on the Guitar...Also I adjusted some processing and dealt with some conflicting eq on the Vocals..I think the overall result is more clarity vocally and from the guitar..I would like to add bass and drums before I re upload so maybe I will get to it next week..Thanks for your listens everyone and thanks for your input Sammy..
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5 years ago
sammydix Artist

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looking forward to the remix. the song's worth it.
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5 years ago
livelargemusic Artist

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Thanks Sammy..
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5 years ago
livelargemusic Artist

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Thanks all of you for Listening..and Taking the time to Chime in...I feel commenting is so important to a song's development..We help eachother..I love this community..Even though I sometimes disappear for what feels like years sometimes (and sometimes really is) I always find the atmosphere and general Society has not changed at all..there are always old friends and new aquaintances Waiting..Icomp is like The Bar Cheers where they're always glad you came..Thanks Gents.
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5 years ago
toveco Artist

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I do as you say, listening on my phone...and you right sounds grate all true smiley
Nice song, but sound a bit wired when I listening on my Stereo haha


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5 years ago
TomDevine Listener

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Very nice song and I really like the guitar sound. Cool vocals and lyrics, too.
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5 years ago
Vixen Artist

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I like the lyrics, love the vocals...just found the overdrive guitar effect to harsh for what you are doing lyrically and vocally
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5 years ago
dmorales Artist

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original and effective! i would have used a normal acoustic guitar sound but you made this work haha. i'd love to hear a bassline to go along with it, but i can understand the feel of just the guitar. well done smiley
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5 years ago
livelargemusic Artist

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@dmorales Thanks for the comment, I agree that a bassline as well as drums will fill this song out much better than the solitary guitar..Most of the stuff I post on here is Raw Pre-Production , usually so fresh it is merely a skelton of things to come, minimal takes on instruments or vocals, so it will always see More production and instrumentation..It's interesting both you Sammy and Vix mentioned the effecting on the guitar..lol..this guitar is actually my classical guitar processed through Guitar Rig..just having some fun..I have remixed with considerably less drive on the guitar, but i believe i will leave it effected, atleast in the chorus' when it starts to find its way to a more complete song..Thank for the listens everyone..
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EvilFactman Artist

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Well written song but the distortion is a little annoying. Vocals are good.
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5 years ago
livelargemusic Artist

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@evilguy..lol..I agree and have remixed the original ghost track with considerably less drive on the guitar..Thanks for the Listen
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ShadowofNine Artist

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Awesome song, needs some changes in instrumentation I believe or perhaps just get ride of the distorted guitar which for me detracts from a really good song... smiley
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Bachthoven Artist

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Really digging this. Very well written and, to me, production is much less important than the actual songwriting. Of course, that could be a result of the fact that all of my songs are horribly produced, but still, I tend to care less about the quality of a recording and more about the lyrics/melody of the song. Anyway, I guess what I'm trying to say is that I really enjoyed your tune. So, thanks. smiley
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Badstone_Music Artist

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awesome job, kid, as always!
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thedickhickeyband Artist

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hey, did anyone mention there may be too much distortion on that guitar? smiley

Bach's right though, it's a great song and it takes what it takes.

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Deebeesea Artist

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I did love your lyrics and singing but have to admit the guitar was a little overpowering, nonetheless I loved it all in all! ...Diane
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