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Ragged
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Released: Aug 2, 2005 | 11:35 PM
Category: Electronica
Application: N/A
Loop Use: N/A

File Type: .mp3
File Size: 2.56 MB

Plays: 1195
Downloads: 3
Weekly Plays: 6
Weekly Downloads: 0
Statistic reset day: Tuesday

License: Unknown/Unset
An experiment.
want to see if anyone thinks it has any merit, could be reworked, or should i just trash the ragged piece of flotsam.
comments pos or neg most welcome.

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YOsBodyguard Listener

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on behalf of yohmar,, theres nice mix of soundz flowin but yo thinks the synth at the intro
that pops up thru out is a bit high loud on the ear and some fx's you could do without
however nonono not 2 trash,, could be reworked but not trashed
theres a lot of texture flowin in there

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12 years ago
FrozenEntropy Moderator

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Agree with yohmar.. Synths inthe beginning are loud. The flow/ melody is good.maybe try a different synth sound. I like the effects In the middle of the song. Has a modern lounge feel that I think is really cool.
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12 years ago
CShelCShore Artist

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First, thank you for listening to my songs, and giving me feedback.

I am about to listen to your other works, but thought I would just post a comment on your brand new track "Ragged."

There is a lot of great things going on in the track. It at times reminds me of "Labyrinth" era Bowie. Dream like.

Here are my thoughs on your not so finished track:

-More needs to happen sooner. The song doesn't kick in until the middle, and by that time, I was a little bored.
-But I LOVE what happens in the middle. There is a great tribal/jungle feel... but in a weird, dream-like way. But...
- I then wanted it to really take off... and it just lost steam again. I liked what happens at the end... maybe have that come in sooner... and then add something for an even bigger ending. (Do I sound like someone that has no idea how to read or speak songwriting? ... jeez.)

This one is a keeper... one to go back to. (I have like eight of these.) There are a lot of parts that really work... there is an exciting song in there.
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12 years ago
IanRobinson Listener

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I agree with Frozen Forget the begining.. Middle/ end is great.. Dont trash it! Just fine tuning needed. smiley
Ian
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12 years ago
elder Artist

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Thanks all.
sounds like some good advice.
I'll rework it sometime.
Right now I'm too into Shroud.
elder
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12 years ago
RiGee Artist

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How could I miss all of this..the real good things you realize not always at the first glance..but they stay good for ever.

RG
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