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Released: Mar 31, 2016 | 1:33 AM
Category: Country
Application: Logic Pro/Studio
Loop Use: No loops

File Type: .mp3
File Size: 4.96 MB

Plays: 659
Downloads: 7
Weekly Plays: 5
Weekly Downloads: 0
Statistic reset day: Thursday

License: Commercial derivatives allowed; contact artist for permission
I haven't been around lately, I apologize for that.
Been mighty busy. Anyway.....
Here is my latest original song that has given me much grief. smiley This is version 3 and also many lyric versions. I even had a 3rd person lyric that I kinda liked.
This one is rather sloppy in places with very sloppy bass. But I got tired of working on it so here it is. Sort of an unplugged attempt, 'cept for the drums and bass.
I hope you like it.

Exclusive usage of pointless picks natch.
www.pointlesspicks.com

See my video here
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PGysVJbiVRY

Also check out One of our fellow open micer's video. By Joe Wilford,
Lead singer of the ex group TRAILSIDE RANGERS, Just great!
Ya gotta see this!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_F2gLL1l8IQ


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becwil Moderator

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Nice song, even in its sloppiness. Well worth revisiting later when you are ready to work on it again.
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jl Administrator

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Good grief
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1 year ago
Kaverley Artist

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Nice, overall I like it. Definitely worth re-doing and turning it into a first class song.
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brassgospelguy Artist

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Seems so many of us have been in the same boat of late...I agree with the others that you have a great block to build on here....the inspiration will come my friend
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cacciamai Artist

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Awesome. Love it. Thanks. -m-
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mfwmiles Artist

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have i mentioned how much i LOVE your voice man!!! i watched your knocking video as well...you sound like steve forbert to me
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A1K3M1 Listener

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I can relate to your description. Life has a way of keeping us from our 'first love' from time to time. But we always find our way back. As Miles said, your voice is fantastic. Conveys so much soul and passion in every lyric. Excellent original songwriting and performance. I sure can relate to your lyrics. Very universal. Great work, thanks for sharing with us.
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Cinderella Artist

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*This is my second attempt at posting a comment*

Nice to see you back, Neal. ..........Took a while to get to this song (due to the slowness of the site) but you know what?.....you're worth it!!

Don't hear you do Country songs too often, so it's a treat...I'm liking your cowboy accent. .......Gosh, 3 versions, wow... .....I decided long ago to just stick to just one version when I am composing melody, and lyrics....I have a hard enough problem just deciding which final mix I will use. smiley

It's a good song, I like the lyrics and catchy melody. Nice idea to double the vocals at the end. I like it. .....Will keep my eyes open to see if you upload it again with any changes. smiley

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1 year ago
Mike_Lynn Artist

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Beautiful song indeed.
Really enjoying the melody, the singing and the lyrics.
Simple & neat. Excellent one.
Cheers.
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Dadai Artist

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All the grief of writing and revising brings forth a pearl of song. Love this laid back tune, Neal.
- Jack
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Morris Artist

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THis is a beauty song with a lot of feeling

Love the guitar and your mellow voice.

Thanks for share

BRAVO BRAVO
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ScottHorwath Artist

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Singing certainly is enjoyable to me - in its entirety = makes for a most pleasing song.
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pharmakeus Artist

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Outstading band sound, composition, singing and tight band ... Lover the reverb choices and esp. the textured bass
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pharmakeus Artist

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like the dust she's walking on
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SmokeCloudEnt Artist

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great bass sound
raw feel, to the track
sitting on the couch watching you play...
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maestrodog Artist

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Wow - gorgeous guitars right at the top! Very, very nice song. For some reason this reminds me of "Uncle Cracker". Love it!!
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toveco Artist

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Man this was a great track! really good my friend!

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KennethLavrsen Artist

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You are not alone in beeing too busy for music. It is the first time I have listened to iComp since March. We all live a full life and sometimes we have to put put attention somewhere else. But then it is even more nice to return to the music.

I love this song. Wonderful melody and lovely chords with it. I like the live sound. Both mix and the instrument playing. Lovely vocal work. Really nice
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SebastienGabriel Artist

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Kenneth is right! What a great live sound and your voice is awesome!
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Dorothy_Wilson Artist

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A very heartfelt and soul searching song .. Jibes, I always hang onto every word you sing, while listening in my earphones. I really do love listening to your voice . Great story teller. smiley
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DonnaMarilyn Artist

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What a lovely song. A good melody, and you have such a pleasing voice.
A fine lyric as well. Nice work. smiley
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