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Released: Oct 20, 2005 | 1:55 AM
Category: Alternative
Application: GarageBand
Loop Use: Some loops

File Type: .mp3
File Size: 3.71 MB

Plays: 1395
Downloads: 3
Weekly Plays: 0
Weekly Downloads: 0
Statistic reset day: Thursday

License: Derivative works allowed on iCompositions only; contact artist for permission
I somehow deleted it by accident. A quick remix. I redid the vocals. brought up the Resonator bass. I think its much better. This song is about a girl who came to our city (Moncton) to get away from her small town and her small town life to find out that things are just as crappy in the City. I hope you enjoy the song. Please let me know what you think.

J

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Bashibuzuk Artist

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Je cherche à réaliser ici quelquechose de constructif.
Le son est bon - il s'en dégage une proximité.
La voix n'est pas en place.
J'ai un coup de cœur - je pense à Lamchop (la voix notamment)- connaissez-vous Lambchop ?
Il y a quelquechose dans ce "morceau" de vie, ce "polaroïd" qui me touche…
A mon sens, vous devriez ralentir l'ensemble et jouer la voix encore plus proche - dans le style Lambchop "he's a woman - 2002 ou 2003. Et transmettre une émotion.
- My english is not good enough, sorry…
It's there a nice job, but you can do better than that witht this song… Let me know
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12 years ago
jamestsquid Artist

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Im so-so at french, but thanks I think. Sometimes there's not enough criticism here, just praise. I never heard Lamchop before, I'll check them out.

Are you saying I should have more vocal and less background music?

James T
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12 years ago
Diversion Artist

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Hey James this is awesome. Well written... and that's what it's all about. Oh and the performance was way cool too. Speaking of cool...Lambchop (I don't really see him in your work though). I can't really think of who to compare you to. Sounds like relaxed classic rock to me though.
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KDMan Artist

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I just commented on the 777 version of this. I like this one a lot bettter, I think because of two things: the good story in the description gives me a context, which makes the song more meaningful for me; and I guess I just like the high voice better than the low. You seem to modulate your volume a lot more easily in that range, no real surprise.

Good work. VIVE LE GarageBand! KD
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12 years ago
vaporman Moderator

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There are times your voice gives me a real Lou Reed vibe on this song (but you sing a little more than him.)

I think this is structurally a very good song - and the performance is strong. But the rhythm section is a little too busy for my taste.
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LaFayette Artist

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In agreement with vaporman for the "Reedish" sound : I appreciate.
More marked presence of bass line would be better (for me). Your voice is very present. I like this song.
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thatguy Artist

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Hey! I know a Superbabe in Moncton!

I like this song, the writing, the music are both great. The mix is a bit off to me, but what the heck do I know?

I also go with the overall "Reedish" sound mentioned previously.
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Nice relaxed acoustic rock vibe here. I like it a lot!
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