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Oh no', not again
by DoreenY


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Released: Apr 30, 2007 | 8:04 PM
Category: Spoken Word
Application: [unknown]
Loop Use: No loops

File Type: .mp3
File Size: 1.27 MB

Plays: 1384
Downloads: 1
Weekly Plays: 1
Weekly Downloads: 0
Statistic reset day: Monday

License: Derivative works allowed on iCompositions only; contact artist for permission
This is a poem I originally wrote for a friend but decided to put on icomp as I was told it was really good, I wrote it because my friend was at the time having a particularly bad day and I just wanted to cheer them up. So this is for all those people who have had bad days where things just keep going wrong. It is written with a political theme just for fun. The outro at the end as been left in on purpose. Do hope you enjoy.

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woofer3 Artist

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I do enjoy very much. This is as bubbly as champagne and is written and performed as well as anything I have heard by Pam Ayres. It is instant and clever. It puts me in mind of something I heard years ago called The Raggedy Man, I don't know who wrote it but it was read by an American lady called Sally Hamlin. It's the same sort of poetry. I don't know what you call it,- to me it sounds quite modern with it's irregular gait. I much prefer this stuff to the more metered writing you mostly hear. I enjoyed your first reading here [ Us People ] but I like this one so much ,more. I love the end as well although I do realize it's not really part of the poem.
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DoreenY Artist

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Thank you Woofer3 so much for your kind comments which are much appreciated.
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Mr_Weaver Artist

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ahh yes, one of THOSE days... was it a monday?
when so much perfect bad luck happens, all you can do is laugh!
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I love your accent. It sounds like John lennon. Sorry..!! does that sound shallow. I have no principles, and no sense of direction.

I think this is funny.....

The Poem style is like the grinch stole Christmas. O-well, Im still shallow. O ...man. Im in trouble now........

I love the last part the best. Where there is no poem. Boy, Im not doing so well. am I. I guess I might not get invited back here again.
Id like to here you. Just your personality. Something less structured,. or more improvised. Like what I heard after the poem.

The poem was very nice.....

OK... IM LEAVING........

OMNI. smile!!
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DoreenY Artist

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Thanks for your comments everyone - much appreciated
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Dyl Artist

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Very very nice, Doreen...
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MoorNoki Artist

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Love it!!!

Yes you have an intelligent humor...next to that a real talent for writing poems.


o0o
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enicholsIC Artist

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So well done. Fun from start to finish.
Ed
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really enjoyed this. thanks Doreen
luckily this day is ok...so far. but then if it changes, I'll have this to come back to.
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zallaz Moderator

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I could see Victoria Wood do this smiley
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It's groundhog day! smiley

Still like all good poetry this makes you think. Couldn't we just solve all of our problems with such traffic? I think the government is trying.
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