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album art Silver Screen
by RedthruNthru


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Released: Apr 24, 2008 | 6:02 PM
Category: Spoken Word
Application: [unknown]
Loop Use: Some loops

File Type: .mp3
File Size: 9.39 MB

Plays: 1711
Downloads: 7
Weekly Plays: 1
Weekly Downloads: 0
Statistic reset day: Thursday

License: Derivative works allowed on iCompositions only; contact artist for permission
I wrote Silver Screen some time ago...to a loop my friend Rob created...
lyrically I think it's probably some of my best writing, I also love RonnieY's guitar work. However I think my production lacks a lot.
I've often thought perhaps it would be better with a different vocalist.. as it's really not a genre that I know a thing about. As I'm not a musician...I really havent' a clue what could be done with this track.

So with Raven's encouragement.. I'm popping this out here...to get some feed back from you all.

P.S. I'm not sure about the legality of using real sound clips from films...???
Lyrics are in the box.

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RAVENS Artist

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Hey Donna,

I am so thrilled that you posted this piece. As you know I can relate to the lyrics. No one else could have captured the emotion as well as someone who has experienced it. This was so tastefully put together, I commend your courage & appreciate you sharing it with everyone.

RAVEN smiley
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9 years ago
dirigent Artist

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Very cool smiley wow excellent track, intense atmosphere ...
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9 years ago
RedthruNthru Artist

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Thank you Raven and Andreas for taking the time to listen...
I truly appreciate the kind reviews! This one for me is like a jigsaw puzzle that is almost complete...but the one final piece...that creates the total picture seems to be lost...





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9 years ago
Barretok Artist

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I really like your lyrics and your delivery. The music works quite well. I'm glad you posted it. Very good piece! smiley
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9 years ago
RedthruNthru Artist

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Thanks so much Mr.B smiley I really think I've a love hate relationship with this little brain child.. lol.. I truly appreciate your kindness!
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9 years ago
BlendWellMusic Artist
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Great atmosphere!!

It seems a little dark, with a great pulsing bass line.
Not my usual cup of tea, but your voice sounds different from piece to piece which I find very entertaining.

Thanks
Cam
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9 years ago
archie7777 Artist

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I love this...

Thanks for sharing


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9 years ago
letileti Artist

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Oh this is very very special and I think you are right about the lyrics. Clever and hip. I think this is a gem.
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9 years ago
letileti Artist

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If you were to release it commercially you would have to clear the sound from the film - if it is still under copyright. However- there are plenty of films in the public domain which you can use the sounds for free.
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9 years ago
RedthruNthru Artist

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Thank you so much Jerome and Letileti...for listening! smiley
Letileti.. I appreciate your thoughts on the public domain sound clips... smiley
I doubt I'll ever try to do anything with it...This was one of those mad moments where the pen and paper took control.. and then when it came to putting it in to music form.. I really didn't have a clue what I was doing.. smiley But I must admit it was fun playing with those fx's smiley
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9 years ago
offbalance Moderator

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Wow! I love the intensity you've given to your words; the performance is very cool. The driving beat with that distorted guitar work really nails the piece for me. Yeah, this one is hitting my favorites list. smiley
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9 years ago
rex Artist

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Wow, this is really something.
Fantastic performance, Unique and refreshing!
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9 years ago
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You're right -- those are some terrific lyrics. I liked hearing your voice on this one -- I'm not certain what you might have been hearing in your own mind for the "correct" sound as you wrote this, but to these ears, the vocals were very apropos.
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9 years ago
RedthruNthru Artist

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Thanks so much Offbalance,Rex and padowan..for the listen and the encouraging comments!!! stay tuned because this is being reworked by letileti... I can't way to hear what she does with it! smiley smiley smiley smiley
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Bashibuzuk Artist

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Excellent smiley
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9 years ago
MoorNoki Artist

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I heard this yesterday on Mugshots..and I love it INSTANTLY!!!!

kinda siouxie and the banshees versus Blondie....awesome delivery..I'm happy you listened to RAV3NS and uploaded this!!!! My favorite so far!!!!
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8 years ago
RedthruNthru Artist

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Awwh I have again missed a comment... I'm so sorry Brother!
Thank you so much for listening!

Hi Djev, I am glad you like this one.. it has a special place in my heart! Thank you so much for so kindly leaving me a comment!

I appreciate you so very much! smiley
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8 years ago
Henno Artist

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this has an eastern quality? smiley
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8 years ago
RedthruNthru Artist

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Hi Henno...


Ronnie Yarger a friend from another site did several takes on this track.. and I chose the one you hear.. as I loved the eastern a bit mysterious feel to this take. smiley I thank you so much Henno for catching up on my Mugshot..
I truly appreciate you listening and these wonderful comments.
Last edited by RedthruNthru, 8 years ago.
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8 years ago
Garni Listener

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Donna, I love this!
Awesome work my friend! The vocal delivery in this simply brilliant!

Gx
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8 years ago
RedthruNthru Artist

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Thank you so much Garni, for listening, Lyrically it is one of my faves, and I guess even though my production wasn't the greatest, it was only the second track I worked on that I really experimented with multiple tracks smiley So I try not to crucify myself too much over it!
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KennediKing Listener

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Great use of sound bytes at the head and tag!! Just an all around superb piece!! ~Kenn
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7 years ago
RedthruNthru Artist

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Thank you so much Kenn.. I always get surprised when someone likes this one.. as I really had no clue what I was doing just an idea and a music clip and some lyrics... appreciate your kindness!
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